Hi @arouundapp! I wouldn't classify it as an elevator pitch but is an excellent explainer video! So, you definitely want to keep the video!
For an elevator pitch focus on the value and unique selling propositions. Something simple like "Arouund App streamlines community management and event management with world class support making it easier for you to monetize your events with direct payouts, and we're doing it at a fraction of the cost of our competitors..." Let that set the hook, and then you can describe some of the features or provide some additional information.
Just my thought...
How to Write an Elevator Pitch
Start with who you are.
Write about what you do and how you do it.
Explain the results of your work and what makes you unique.
Edit what you've written. ...
Add a good conversation-starter at the beginning. ...
Record your pitch. ...
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