Feedback on investment deck

Hi guys, We are a market place start-up from Amsterdam. Looking for some feedback! Is there somebody here with experience in investing in crowdfunding? I have created this investment deck, we are looking for min 500.000 euro, max 1M. Some context: Our current rev is 3M and we are a 22 rocktstar people team. This far only have 1 angel investor.I am not super used to investors and VC's yet. What do you think of this investment deck? Is this something people would be interested in? Specific question: We have a minimum ticket of 2.500 euro now. Is it too high? We figured, considering the risk, we need people with a bit more insight into that it is a good investment and we did not want to have too many investors to manage. At what amount would you join? If they want a convertible loan, that is possible with a minimum ticket of 10.000 euro. Then they get a 5% interest on the amount, and a 10% discount at the share price when we convert ( at min 1M round) What do you say? Some context: https://nannynina.nl/crowdfundin... Please be honest! Would like some feedback! Thanks !