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Which description is better?
What do you guys think, which one to keep?
If you have a better description, let me know.
https://readhive.webflow.io
NEW description: Tired of wasting time on lousy books?
Life's too short for that! Enter ReadHive, your book buddy. We make finding awesome reads a breeze. Whether you're hunting for new classics or hidden gems, we've got your back. Say goodbye to book boredom!
OLD description: Feeling overwhelmed by the sheer number of books out there. Readhive is here to help you find that are worth giving a try. Whether you're looking for a new classic to add to your shelf or a hidden gem you've never heard of, Readhive has something for you.
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@chitterz How about removing the last 2 lines?
also do visit website to get idea of where it is placed
@nihalkothiyal Here's my take (and I copywrite for a living):
Tired of wasting time on lousy books?
Enter ReadHive -- we make finding awesome reads a breeze. Whether you're hunting for classics or hidden gems, we've got your back. Say goodbye to book boredom!
I like the new one more. Although I would try to get it even shorter. When I write copy I always try to dissect each word in the sentence and understand if it gives any value to my overall objective. If not, it does not have to be here.
If would ask myself for example, is it possible to write this "Life's too short for that! Enter ReadHive, your book buddy. We make finding awesome reads a breeze." in one sentence?
@aljosa_z do you think removing the last 2 lines would be a better option?
@nihalkothiyal "Finding gems in a sea of options is a challenge. Readhive is your personal genie in a bottle for finding your next best read of your life" 👉 Sea, Genie, Diamonds. 👉 almost like a story / adventure. (Might need further iteration, try Chat GPT4 Plus for that)
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