Back on PH - Looking for feedback on our teaser!

I have had a pretty good app streak a month ago, but seeing everyone hustling, busting and launching here on PH really got me motivated to get our app done! Though we had to delay our launch, I think it was a good decision, since we hadn’t anything ready yet. But now we’re back here on PH preparing our launch and I’d love to have your feedback on our teaser here : https://x.com/jonathantahiry/status/1746196327447318938 Thanks fam 🙏🏽