Give Feedback on our Landing Page!

Builders and Hackers, We built our product recently, got first users, and now looking to launch widely. But before we do, I'm reaching out to you for gathering feedback on our landing page. Without telling you anything about our product, here are the landing pages: 1. Creators: https://getyrl.com 2. Businesses: https://getyrl.com/business There's a lot information out there on making "pages that convert", but it's always difficult when you're doing it yourself. Reaching out to you to cover my blind spots and personal biases :) Questions for you: 1. Did you get the message and product? 2. Would a video on the top instead of a graphic be more welcoming? I've been fighting this urge to optimize for page size and load speed, but maybe it shouldn't be a high priority? 2. Rewording our messaging. Improve the copy / design. From colors to messaging, we can perhaps change something? 3. There's incorrect english in the header -- does it bother you a lot? Reasoning for it is symmetry and design. 3. How likely were you to give it a try and click on "Get Started" buttons? Feedback so far I tested with friends and only 1 in 4 people ever click on "Get Started" unless I ask them to. I couldn't gather much from their feedback, and of course there's hesitation to do it (extra step / in built resistance), but I'm sure many pages have higher conversions 2. Most users say they get the product, but they don't want to try unless I demo them, which of course can take too long (scheduling time etc.) All feedback is welcome, please share generously! It could be our lifeline!