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  • Launched a pre-order on GooglePlay. Looking for feedback.

    Mark Prutskiy
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    Google Play: https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=app.bumpy.android Hi guys, We just launched a pre-order on Google Play. How does it look for you? Is the message clear enough?

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    Guillaume Mathieu
    @mark_prutskiy Visuals look great, it is quite straightforward screens. Some remarks hope it can help: - I found the use of black/white font color in each of the titles a bit confusing. It seems just for design purposes (black for the first word) but it is a bit confusing because it sometimes highlights a word that is not very important. Refer to this (https://play.google.com/store/ap...) >> highlight the main message instead, the key feature or word. - I think there is a typo in the screen "find a friend or even more" >> the text says "Lora likes you to", shouldn't it be "likes you too"? - there are 2 screens ending with "... more". Feel a bit redundant. Well, I guess it is up to the users to go for "... more" maybe no need to insist too much on this? Especially I felt it was a bit blurring your unique positioning toward "making friends" and clearly differentiating from other dating apps. - "connections matter": It looks like a general statement. Maybe you could turn this into a value proposition like "Build connections that matter" ? - just my personal graphic opinion, but I think you should remove the white outline or shadow around the black letters >> felt like the words were blurred.