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    Landing page feedback 🍀

    Rayan Zeggari
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    Could you guys tell me what you think about that landing page? https://airmedia.uk/ I thought the best way to get a high-converting landing page was to take the format from the companies that have the most data out there. Went on Unbounce's landing page and took the same format, adapted it to my value proposition and here's the result :)

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    Anastasia Chaikovska
    A bit heavy, too much text. But great job, accents, colors!
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    VIVA
    VIVA
    Rayan, your landing page design is visually striking and effectively communicates your product's value proposition. Great job on creating an engaging user experience!
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    Aly Ab
    Streamline Your Socials with AI. I'm a non native english speaker. This sentence isn't as clear as it should be. "Streamline" isn't a great choice of word; I suggest using another one.
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    Rayan Zeggari
    @aly_ab1 Totally understand your point - changed "streamline your socials" to "manage your socials" :) thanks for the feedback !
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    Paulina Hryniewicz
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    I personally wouldn't use words like "streamline", they are kind of buzz-wordy and don't say much about what you do :)
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    Rayan Zeggari
    @paulinahryniewicz Hey Paulina ! Thanks for the feedback it's a great insight. I've replaced it by "Manage your socials with AI" which explains a bit more about what we're doing. Thanks again
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