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    Landing page opinion: what could be improved for conversions?

    Rayan Zeggari
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    Hey PH community 🍀 After having supported 400+ projects over the last months I've seen the power of this community to provide feedback on each other's projects. Just released our landing page for AirMedia and would be great if some of you would be so kind as giving feedback on the landing page. Here's the link for those willing to help: https://airmedia.uk Feel free to share your landing page and I'll give it some feedback as well👀

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    Harsh Vyas
    On which platform did you create your landing pages?
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    Rayan Zeggari
    @harsh2vyas Hey Harsh ! Used bubble to create it while adding some custom code to customise it as I wished
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    Harsh Vyas
    @rayan_zeggari Have you tried Pagemaker? It provides landing page-building capabilities without the need for any coding.
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    Wishing you the best of success!
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    Kali
    Hey Rayan, your landing page looks very sleek and modern! In general I like the look of it, but here are some nitpicking notes: -Your tagline doesn't help me understand exactly what AirMedia does or how it helps me (but it does sound like a cool one-liner a superhero might say!) -Some of the sections appear spread out on a high-res monitor (like the pictures and words are too far apart) -Don't be afraid to use more color! I don't know exactly what your marketing/branding guidelines are, but the website overall is quite dark and not much contrast that draws the eye anywhere --- If you don't mind taking a look, I have a very basic signup screen for early access before our alpha launch here: https://kali.day/
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    Rayan Zeggari
    @kali_curated Thanks for the comments ! Really appreciate it :) Will make the necessary changes Just had a look at the signup screen and don't have much to say as I don't know what Kali is offering (simply from the page). So I wouldn't see anyone joining the waitlist without any context. Feel free to provide some context here :) I like the ranking system for the waitlist by the way!
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    Kali
    @rayan_zeggari Thanks Rayan - we kept it very vague during our pre-alpha, but it's helpful to know that it might be "too" vague and a barrier to entry! To keep Kali's mission brief: Take steps to earn rewards! Connect your favorite fitness tracking app and every step you take is converted into Kali Points. You can then redeem those Kali Points at our digital bazaar, where we showcase founders, small entrepreneurs, and a curated list of up-and-coming brands! Thanks again for your review and sign-up! The PH community is awesome :)
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